| commit | 64cf378960689deef3d23359eaddea9a21ee683d | [log] [tgz] |
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| author | Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@kernel.org> | Thu Jan 16 19:31:26 2020 -0800 |
| committer | Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@kernel.org> | Sat Jan 18 11:28:48 2020 -0800 |
| tree | 49222740cfa0d44c919488fbc86cb1e5f0fc4af5 | |
| parent | 26adcb5e639668dfdcd043abeaf5033a004ac25a [diff] |
howto: Word parallel-programming-as-engineering less obscurely The "where ... once ... becoming" wording might be legal English, it is a bit obscure and less than friendly to those whose native language is not English. This commit therefore rewrites the offending paragraph. Reported-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com> Signed-off-by: Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@kernel.org>